You framed your object nicely the bike with the windows in the back gives the image a feel of passing time or a childhood memory. You did a good job on the edges of the image with the running chemical marks. The finger prints are a nice touch it might have been interesting to smudge the second one as you grabbed the glass and your finger slipped a little. You have a lot of broken glass on the left side of the image I would like to see one of those little pieces missing. I think it would be nice to bump up the contrast a little to make the bike stand out even more. Over all good job.
My concept was to capture something that creates a sense of nostalgia. Tricycles are typically associated with childhood, and I feel like nowadays we don't see children outside as much riding their tricycles/bicycles, and because this specific tricycle was extremely rusted, it makes a statement on this fact of tricycles being sort of outdated, and this sense of nostalgia.
You framed your object nicely the bike with the windows in the back gives the image a feel of passing time or a childhood memory. You did a good job on the edges of the image with the running chemical marks. The finger prints are a nice touch it might have been interesting to smudge the second one as you grabbed the glass and your finger slipped a little. You have a lot of broken glass on the left side of the image I would like to see one of those little pieces missing. I think it would be nice to bump up the contrast a little to make the bike stand out even more. Over all good job.
ReplyDeleteMy concept was to capture something that creates a sense of nostalgia. Tricycles are typically associated with childhood, and I feel like nowadays we don't see children outside as much riding their tricycles/bicycles, and because this specific tricycle was extremely rusted, it makes a statement on this fact of tricycles being sort of outdated, and this sense of nostalgia.
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