Monday, February 17, 2020

Jazmyn McCallum- Retouch




1 comment:

  1. I see a dinosaur. You riding the dinosaur. It looks like you are fighting some sort of animal. I like the fog aspect added to it, it gives it an eerie feeling

    What I see in the image and how I interpret it is, one the idea of childhood and playing outside fighting different monsters, as in a form of using your imagination. Two again fighting monsters but dealing with them on a personal level and overcoming what is bothering you.

    For me I think the black and white image is a little dark, I think if it had more contrast it would be stronger. You also lose the dinosaur in the trees when it reaches the final image so I would address that to. For my image I struggled with the background. I think if I would have been able to resolve the background it would have been stronger. I think if you used a different background it would elevate your image to that next step.I think it would be awesome if the dinosaur was bigger too.

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