This is a great idea. I love how you played with not only scale, but also personification of the fast food meal. The shadow of the burger is done well. Great use of scale in the concept.
I agree with the above comment. The concept seems quite strong but I do find some disjointed efforts in the execution of the image. while the shadow seems to be in the right it also appears to be too sharp compared to the shadow of the runner. Also I wish the background had more of an effect on the scene. This would be a great opportunity to engage you concept in a more compelling way to draw the viewer into the scene more. I would explore something that would allow both subjects to breathe and offer space to imply potential movement throughout the scene.
This is hilarious. You did such a good job getting the lighting and shadow to match the figure and the burger. It feels like this could be some sort of surreal world where this could actually happen. It's simple, but effective. Good work.
This composition is so funny and the concept is also so relatable to me. I think that the way you carried out your concept is super creative. It reminds me a little bit of Pac Man so maybe you could push it to look a little like a Pac Man board? Maybe have dots in front and behind of the figures to make it look more like the game? I don't know if that's a direction you want to go but I think that may be an interesting element to include
Love the comedy of your piece and the play in the idea of fast food and how it can consume you, also the fact that he’s running almost as though trying to burn off fast food weight is interesting also! I would retouch the selection of the Big Mac, there is some residual background there, also, adding a bit of a blur to the shadow. Good work!
This is a great idea. I love how you played with not only scale, but also personification of the fast food meal. The shadow of the burger is done well. Great use of scale in the concept.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the above comment. The concept seems quite strong but I do find some disjointed efforts in the execution of the image. while the shadow seems to be in the right it also appears to be too sharp compared to the shadow of the runner. Also I wish the background had more of an effect on the scene. This would be a great opportunity to engage you concept in a more compelling way to draw the viewer into the scene more. I would explore something that would allow both subjects to breathe and offer space to imply potential movement throughout the scene.
ReplyDeleteThis is hilarious. You did such a good job getting the lighting and shadow to match the figure and the burger. It feels like this could be some sort of surreal world where this could actually happen. It's simple, but effective. Good work.
ReplyDeleteThis composition is so funny and the concept is also so relatable to me. I think that the way you carried out your concept is super creative. It reminds me a little bit of Pac Man so maybe you could push it to look a little like a Pac Man board? Maybe have dots in front and behind of the figures to make it look more like the game? I don't know if that's a direction you want to go but I think that may be an interesting element to include
ReplyDeleteLove the comedy of your piece and the play in the idea of fast food and how it can consume you, also the fact that he’s running almost as though trying to burn off fast food weight is interesting also! I would retouch the selection of the Big Mac, there is some residual background there, also, adding a bit of a blur to the shadow. Good work!
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