the juxtaposition here is quite effective. Great job with illustrating the difference between diets and communicating that through the subjects gestures and poses. I might try and photograph both the fruit and the sweets in the same scene so that the perspective matches up better. Also look into blurring one of the figure so that they match the focus of the surroundings they inhabit.
I love this concept. Very fun! Your selection of the figure on the junk food is done so well. The figure on the banana isn't as seamless as the other. Since the bananas are starting to be slightly out of focus, maybe applying a very small blur would help.
I think the focuses between the figures and there position within the depth of the setting don't quite match the objects in the original photo at the same depths. Some tweaking of blur effects might help.
I also think that such saturated colors as those on those fruits would at least faintly reflect onto the figure in some way.
I think the postures match the interacting objects really well. It was a very well done compositing process.
The idea of scale is clearly seen in this photo. I would play wit the shadows more, as they seem unnatural in the current state. The figure sitting on the banana seems a bit unnatural because of its sharp focus on the out of focus banana. I think fixing the shadows and focus would make for a top-notch image. Good job developing the concept.
The concept working in this piece is very clearly articulated and uses the idea of scale and proportion well. The use of depth of field is also a plus in minimizing the background.
I would work on the figures a bit more, especially the banana sitter. The edges around her are two heavy and she seems a bit to sharp in reference to the surroundings and banana.
Great concept and play with juxtaposition here! It’s so relevant and funny. I would rework some of the shadows, for example the donut shadow is missing and the orange shadow is a bit harsher than the rest. Good job overall though!
the juxtaposition here is quite effective. Great job with illustrating the difference between diets and communicating that through the subjects gestures and poses. I might try and photograph both the fruit and the sweets in the same scene so that the perspective matches up better. Also look into blurring one of the figure so that they match the focus of the surroundings they inhabit.
ReplyDeleteI love this concept. Very fun! Your selection of the figure on the junk food is done so well. The figure on the banana isn't as seamless as the other. Since the bananas are starting to be slightly out of focus, maybe applying a very small blur would help.
ReplyDeleteI think the focuses between the figures and there position within the depth of the setting don't quite match the objects in the original photo at the same depths. Some tweaking of blur effects might help.
ReplyDeleteI also think that such saturated colors as those on those fruits would at least faintly reflect onto the figure in some way.
I think the postures match the interacting objects really well. It was a very well done compositing process.
The idea of scale is clearly seen in this photo. I would play wit the shadows more, as they seem unnatural in the current state. The figure sitting on the banana seems a bit unnatural because of its sharp focus on the out of focus banana. I think fixing the shadows and focus would make for a top-notch image. Good job developing the concept.
ReplyDeleteThe concept working in this piece is very clearly articulated and uses the idea of scale and proportion well. The use of depth of field is also a plus in minimizing the background.
ReplyDeleteI would work on the figures a bit more, especially the banana sitter. The edges around her are two heavy and she seems a bit to sharp in reference to the surroundings and banana.
Great concept and play with juxtaposition here! It’s so relevant and funny. I would rework some of the shadows, for example the donut shadow is missing and the orange shadow is a bit harsher than the rest. Good job overall though!
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