The composition of this image is really nice. It moves your eye around the piece with the figures gesture, as well as with the distressed elements you created. A successful attempt at collodion, for sure.
The double exposure effect of the print is done really well, the under exposure is merely a ghost which doesn't call too much attention away from the print. The bevel effect around the holes is too obvious and look photoshopped, especially in the parts that start to become grainy. Make the bevel smaller and crisper in order to look more realistic.
Although the composition of the image is constructed well, maybe try changing the toning color that is one the image. The editing of the distress marks are done very well, the only thing I would recommend to fix are the thin lines on the outer edge of the image so that doesn't look like a solid border.
The composition of this piece is interesting, however, I believe the flaws could have been executed a bit better. The clear border around the piece doesn't always correlate with the edges of the image being pulled away. It would make sense that this border also decayed with the rest of the image in that area.
I love the distressing of your image mainly on the left half of the composition. This shot feels somewhat like an ancient movie still! Is this how you envisioned it conceptually to work with the collodion look? The photo overall could do without the super thin light-colored border, in my opinion.
I like the edges but I wish the picture wasn't very dark, I wish I can see more details.
ReplyDeleteI think it's effective how heavily destroyed the image is, it really conveys the age of the piece.
ReplyDeleteThe composition of this image is really nice. It moves your eye around the piece with the figures gesture, as well as with the distressed elements you created. A successful attempt at collodion, for sure.
ReplyDeleteThe double exposure effect of the print is done really well, the under exposure is merely a ghost which doesn't call too much attention away from the print. The bevel effect around the holes is too obvious and look photoshopped, especially in the parts that start to become grainy. Make the bevel smaller and crisper in order to look more realistic.
ReplyDeleteAlthough the composition of the image is constructed well, maybe try changing the toning color that is one the image. The editing of the distress marks are done very well, the only thing I would recommend to fix are the thin lines on the outer edge of the image so that doesn't look like a solid border.
ReplyDeleteThe composition of this piece is interesting, however, I believe the flaws could have been executed a bit better. The clear border around the piece doesn't always correlate with the edges of the image being pulled away. It would make sense that this border also decayed with the rest of the image in that area.
ReplyDeleteI love the distressing of your image mainly on the left half of the composition. This shot feels somewhat like an ancient movie still! Is this how you envisioned it conceptually to work with the collodion look? The photo overall could do without the super thin light-colored border, in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteThe lowered camera angle is a strong point of this photograph, and I think it could have been exaggerated even more.
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