Sunday, March 18, 2018

Scale Exaggerated- Yount


6 comments:

  1. The scale exaggeration comes across in the relation between the flower and the cabin, but I feel like adding an animal or bug into this scene (maybe on the porch) would add interest and further your concept.

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  2. I want to live in your tiny house, its so cute and small compared to the wild flowers and grass around it I think you did a great job at scaling it correctly the only thing I would suggest is maybe having a small person come out of the house or next to it.

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  3. Good job with placing the cabin withing the scene and utilizing shadows to really make it feel like it is set within the shadow of the bushes. I would look at potentially reworking the perspective since the cabin feels like it is falling backwards in the scene. Also the image is missing that third element to really tell the story. Perhaps a large figure in the background or some small inhabitant of the cabins out front? I does not have to be human or even living just another thing that adds to the story.

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  4. The capture of the sun through the leave and the little sparkles on the photo really drive the magic home. Pull out the yellows and brightest purples on the bell shaped flowers to make them feel more a part of the scene. While the background of the street is interesting, I feel a more natural woodsy background might be a better fit, or really pushing the concept of the battle between natural and industrial by adding a blurred version of the destruction that humans cause to the environment.

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  5. The scale idea comes across well. I would push the bucolic landscape feel that your headed toward by utilizing a more effective background (the road doesn't fit the lighting and pastoral scene.

    I would also consider another element that makes the scale more dramatic as I think the idea of the small house is something already very familiar (for example, kids build fairy houses and bird houses are ofter created to look like cabins),

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  6. The environment you’ve created is so magical! The perspective is very nice, i would, however think of adding another aspect to enhance the scale of the cabin, like a butterfly or insect crawling!?

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