In the terms of concept and execution, I feel like yours one definitely one of the strongest. You applied your technical skill (very well) to send a crisp message. Despite a few tweaks mentioned in class, like eliminating the brick, I believe that this was a very successful endeavor. You did a great job matching the window with the lines of the walls and creating that perspective, all the way down to the colors.
Okay- so I actually like this one a lot- but I think that there are a few things that could be pushed further. The concept is really awesome, probably one of my favorites in class, but I think that maybe if there was someone in the window it might complete the look. I bet it would be hard to actually get someone to do that, so it would take more time than I think you probably had to do the project- because I'm sure a lot of people would not cooperate. I also think that for this image, while the tones are pretty cohesive, I think that the photograph might be more successful if it was in black and white.
I really really love your concept though!! It reminds me of Spy Kids, where they would put the money in the microwave and food would come out.
In the terms of concept and execution, I feel like yours one definitely one of the strongest. You applied your technical skill (very well) to send a crisp message. Despite a few tweaks mentioned in class, like eliminating the brick, I believe that this was a very successful endeavor. You did a great job matching the window with the lines of the walls and creating that perspective, all the way down to the colors.
ReplyDeleteOkay- so I actually like this one a lot- but I think that there are a few things that could be pushed further. The concept is really awesome, probably one of my favorites in class, but I think that maybe if there was someone in the window it might complete the look. I bet it would be hard to actually get someone to do that, so it would take more time than I think you probably had to do the project- because I'm sure a lot of people would not cooperate. I also think that for this image, while the tones are pretty cohesive, I think that the photograph might be more successful if it was in black and white.
ReplyDeleteI really really love your concept though!! It reminds me of Spy Kids, where they would put the money in the microwave and food would come out.