Monday, February 12, 2018

"Good for Health, Bad for Education" Transformative Retouch Project


"Good for Health, Bad for Education"

Transformative Retouch Project
based on Akira by Otomo Katsuhiro

-Marco




5 comments:

  1. I really like the shadow in this piece, it adds a dramatic effect.

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  2. I think that you did a really good job with the photoshop in your clothing. It looks super really and the illustrative touch that you put on the entire piece even with the photographic elements is interesting. The only thing I would say is maybe doing something with the white space. There's a lot of empty space within the composition which may do something conceptually, but visually it's a little distracting.

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  3. Very well done. I might seem picky right now but the words on the bottom "Marco" should be leaning more inside the picture, otherwise it looks like it should have been a watermark. But otherwise this was excellent work!

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  4. The character manipulation is believable and the added shadow is well executed. You did a really good job here.

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  5. Your color overlay of the red over your clothes is flawless, and I can't even tell that it's photoshopped! Some of your perspectives are a little off, making the picture feel unbalanced. You can fix this easily by using the perspective grid in Photoshop to help pull those lines together. Also, while the shadows on the figure have nice contrast, the shadows on the bike feel as if they were faded out, making the bike much flatter than the figure. Darken those shadows to match the same intensity as the figure to pull to two objects together.

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