Most of the students comments were about the concept of this piece. They think that using train tracks don't necessarily mean a bumpy ride. However, in my opinion, I think that trains don't deliver a smooth ride but more like a shaky ride.
In my opinion, things I would have changed about this piece is stretching the train tracks to get a more longer ride. I am ok with adding some destruction to the tracks like some of my classmates suggested.
Most of the students comments were about the concept of this piece. They think that using train tracks don't necessarily mean a bumpy ride. However, in my opinion, I think that trains don't deliver a smooth ride but more like a shaky ride.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, things I would have changed about this piece is stretching the train tracks to get a more longer ride. I am ok with adding some destruction to the tracks like some of my classmates suggested.